Tags: Juanita, Kid, Lance, Martines, O'Reilly, Pronto, Quetz, Valdez, Whiskey
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February 19th, 2009 at 6:57 pm
You should check your spelling/wording. On the last panel the phrase that you put “there’s no point…”
It should be “their is no…”
Just wanted to let you know about that.
February 20th, 2009 at 1:25 am
Um, no. That would be wrong. It would be “there” not “their”. “Their” is a possesive plural pronoun. “There” in this sentence, is used to introduce the verb (“would be”) before the subject (“point”).
Now he did forget to place a comma after “don’t” and it feels that there is another missing comma in that same bubble at an earlier point. However, most people don’t care about missing commas. He is also missing an apostrophe in “there’s”. If you are going to critique on grammar, please get it right. Otherwise, be quiet about it and let others enjoy the comic.
February 20th, 2009 at 1:39 am
Whoops. The verb would be “is” (was going back and forth as I was typing the above), but everything else is right… Except my own grammar in that paragraph, in case you are one of those kind of people who would try to use that against me in this.
February 20th, 2009 at 1:11 pm
It’s part 1 #36 in case anyone’s wondering.
February 21st, 2009 at 7:27 am
Meh, finished up to this point in less then 2 work days….what do I do now? Oh…I guess I could work.
February 21st, 2009 at 10:14 am
Of course, if we’re going to criticize, isn’t Quetz’s name misspelled? Isn’t it “Juanita?”
February 23rd, 2009 at 11:31 pm
I’ve got the nagging feeling that he was very tired when he did the texts :-p
But that’s no excuse … please go on and on and on… please !
Hopes baby lets you sleep sometime ! :-$